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731: Systems Check

December 28th, 2018, 2:05 am

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Someone looks overworked

posted by Guest on December 28th, 2018, 2:05 am


team work.

posted by comercole on December 28th, 2018, 2:06 am


Guys, I gotta bad feel about this.

posted by Guest on December 28th, 2018, 2:33 am

  What could possibly go wrong?

Absolutely nothing will go wrong at all. Like nothing what so ever. No possiblity.

posted by Wolfier (Guest) on December 28th, 2018, 2:34 am


ok, am i the only one who thinks the thingy looks like a smash ball? is darkrai gonna use his final smash?

posted by Mattt (Guest) on December 28th, 2018, 3:29 am


Still a long journey, eh?

posted by AndreTheLugia on December 28th, 2018, 5:44 am


Nothing bad will happen. trust me.

posted by Flowey (Guest) on December 28th, 2018, 6:06 am

  Geez it does!!

That thing loppuny said a couple pages ago is Right...

It does look like a death ray!!

posted by S U C C (Guest) on December 28th, 2018, 6:42 am


Need a duct tape?
Use flex tape!

posted by Don't call me anything (Guest) on December 28th, 2018, 10:08 am


I've got a real bad feeling about this...

posted by That One Guy (Guest) on December 28th, 2018, 11:17 am

Everyone assumes worse case.

Everything's gonna go fine with Darkrai, The only thing I'm expecting is the fireworks between Jen and Lovria. Outside of that I hope and pray it iz purely anticlimacticly happy ending for dealing with Darkrai's XD factor.

After this Hoopla is going to show up, take away boss kitty, and force Team meenies and Team Act with N and Wes on a rescue mission, and I include Darkrai on any team with Jen on it.

posted by MercenaryX on December 28th, 2018, 12:11 pm

Barely Together

“Debateable, I’d say that this mess is held together with spit and duct tape, except we don’t have any duct tape.” Mewtwo’s quotes are hilarious.
@MercenaryX, I agree, this will workout just fine.

posted by SmartTurtle04 on December 28th, 2018, 1:57 pm


The Jerk-O-Lantern is finally listening. Now all we need is lovrina and Jen to meet again.

posted by Julian (Guest) on December 28th, 2018, 4:32 pm

This was hard to find!


This is what I ment, but Atlantis was mentioned in one of the pokemon movies? Which one?

posted by MercenaryX on December 28th, 2018, 5:04 pm

Thank You for Your Work

@MercenaryX, I watched the episode, and it was great. The mask can't be used outside of the Queens home. So we are safe. Also, I was thinking of Pokemon Ranger: Temple of the Sea, with Manaphy. Too bad Brock and Misty are only occasional cameos now. Do you remember the episode where James dressed up as a Moltres?

posted by SmartTurtle04 on December 28th, 2018, 6:22 pm


@SmartTurtle04 yeah, I saw clips of it, can't remember if I saw it before, will need a name or season and episode to find.

Also there is still the possibility that she used a portable device or system to influence things outside of her home. Kind of like the final fantasy crystal chronicles where the villages send out teams to collect power to keep a deadly myst at bay. I am thinking something like that is used.

However I figure it may have been very limiting in terms of quantity and quality that prevented her from expanding a huge Empire

posted by MercenaryX on December 29th, 2018, 2:12 am


Sooo... Countless hours of hard work and no play? Yeah that'll make boss kitty a dull boy.

posted by ILeninVelikyNamPutOzaril on December 29th, 2018, 2:56 am

  please no

Like, now would be time for a nap. One does not do The Big Thing right after hours of grueling work. Sleep on it, then commence. That's science 101

posted by kikibug on December 29th, 2018, 12:42 pm

Fortune Hunters....

@MercenaryX, "Fortune Hunters" The Johto Journeys, episode 41.

Also, You have a point. what do you think that empire would have been like?

posted by SmartTurtle04 on December 29th, 2018, 12:51 pm


@SmartTurtle04 My best guess on that Empire would be some sort of mix between South American ancient as text or mayans given the architecture and possibly something along the lines of Mesopotamian ancient Babylonian like but with a heavy emphasis on potential slavery. I say that because again the Queen of pokemon was basically controlling them and the pokemon Mystery dungeon as well as the ash getting turned into a pikachu episode gives us president. My guess is that It could have been a very Conquest hungry Empire. However the dependency on that mask and the possibility of the portable systems being a very strong Lynch pin that if taking out could explain the downfall of said Empire. Again this is all conjecture but at the very least I'm basing this off of what little evidence there is and have a very good idea that it's still a possibility.

posted by MercenaryX on December 30th, 2018, 12:30 am

South American Empire....

@MercenaryX, It sounds like a very strong possibilty, based solely on assumption. That would be an interesting episode of Pokemon to have Celeby go back in time to when that Temple was young. Hopefully colonists did not give everyone small pox..... I like the Lynch pin idea better.

posted by SmartTurtle04 on December 30th, 2018, 12:36 pm


let's just hope nothing explodes.

posted by darth deebious the wise on December 30th, 2018, 1:11 pm

According to Plan

@darth deebious the wise, If Mewtwo's Machine does explode, at least it will not cause a near world ending disaster. (again).

posted by SmartTurtle04 on December 30th, 2018, 2:40 pm


@SmartTurtle04 Deftly going back in time would be a better idea especially if you end up becoming a pokemon and a legendary at that, With all Lynch pin ideas basically how most of these ancient civilizations used to run. Especially the conquering one's if you look back at things. But the ideas pretty much looking at it from the lady got to ambitious if you ask me. It would explain why her entire Empire collapsed and possibly very suddenly to. I can imagine people who were trainers back then been turned into pokemon and forced to be partners with their pokemon in more than certain other ways.

posted by MercenaryX on December 31st, 2018, 12:55 am

Too Ambitious

@MercenaryX, That sounds very possible. Turning Into a Deoxys would be an interesting experience. Though it would be Ironic to turn into a Victini.(Ignoring Mythical vs Legendary.) I imagine that once the Empire collapsed, the pokemon lived happy and free lives?

Also, can you believe this is the last day of 2018? Maybe comment on the next page, to start off the new year?

posted by SmartTurtle04 on December 31st, 2018, 12:34 pm


@SmartTurtle04 yup, but who will be first for the new year?

posted by MercenaryX on December 31st, 2018, 8:56 pm

2019 First....

@MercenaryX, That is the million Poke' question. This will be fun. Happy New Year, it's been a great year getting to know you. Talking about your comic is fun. Thank you for all your responses. Cheers, to more in the New Year. :)

posted by SmartTurtle04 on December 31st, 2018, 10:00 pm


@SmartTurtle04 I just hope that when this comic ends we can show up elsewhere, mostly because I have been following other comics here that just end. Though I wish I could draw, thdn I could draw uo my Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Idea about the human city that got sent to the pokemon world with everyone in it.

posted by MercenaryX on January 1st, 2019, 12:13 am

You Made Me Think of Ditto the Pokemon

@MercenaryX, I guess, that we can talk in the Evil Plan comic? Or Deviant Art? I am going to make an account tomorrow. Also, I can draw! (It's still 2018!)

posted by SmartTurtle04 on January 1st, 2019, 12:21 am


@SmartTurtle04 My user name is the same there on Deviant art as well.

posted by MercenaryX on January 1st, 2019, 12:45 am

This Is Going To Be Fun

@MercenaryX, I will keep my user name the same on there as well! One More Hour Until 2019! (It is now 2019!)

posted by SmartTurtle04 on January 1st, 2019, 12:58 am