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Oh snap, that's not good

posted by Guest on September 25th, 2018, 2:11 am


I feel even worse for Darkrai now.

posted by orgostevani on September 25th, 2018, 2:11 am

  What about Jen

Okay, now I'm getting a little suspicious... considered that Lovrina is the whole reason Jen is even there, amd as her sister she MIGHT be able to get her to collaborate, how is it that we've never seen or heard of them interacting? Is it just Jen being offput by the idea or there is going to be some grand plot twist/revelation the authors are setting up?

posted by Komodo23 on September 25th, 2018, 2:15 am


man, N is pissed in panel 2

posted by matttttttttttttttttttttttt (Guest) on September 25th, 2018, 2:42 am


Time for some action?

posted by ILeninVelikyNamPutOzaril on September 25th, 2018, 2:43 am

Oh I wanna take her down

I'm normally a pacifist but I will straight up end her for Darkrai. All she's done is cause problems for everyone else

posted by Truefan108 on September 25th, 2018, 2:43 am


Lemme make sure I have this down:
XD001 is Shadow Lugia
XD002 is Darkrai (protect him :( )
XD003 is Victini (currently MIA)

On a side note, 'Rina's a glutton for punishment.. can't wait to see how this plays out.

posted by SensingTabby (Guest) on September 25th, 2018, 2:51 am


I know the theme of this fic is redemption, but does Lovrina deserves any?

posted by Readrunners (Guest) on September 25th, 2018, 3:28 am


"Just to clarify. In case you actually believed her."

posted by WiispNightmare on September 25th, 2018, 6:54 am


Welp, this is gonna starts with a BANG.

posted by AndreTheLugia on September 25th, 2018, 7:54 am


You, mdear, are ENTIRELY shucklefuckled.
Have fun!

posted by Lynxiechan on September 25th, 2018, 9:06 am


Well I hope we are getting somewhere.

posted by comercole on September 25th, 2018, 9:10 am


@Komodo23 - Jen hates Lovrina due to Lovrina abusing Pokemon. The only thing 'Rina could do is either blackmail Jen or take somebody hostage to force Jen into action.

Jen isn't just going to willing go along with anything Lovrina might whip up unless there's no choice in the matter.

@Readrunners - Considering at the end of XD: Gale of Darkness when 'Rina meets up with XD's protagonist again, she just assumes he was there to start up a "Lovrina Fanclub". That should tell you what the answer is.

posted by Ngamer01 on September 25th, 2018, 10:07 am


Is that actually "sombratoxin" (in which case, nice Overwatch reference), or is it a typo for scombrotoxin? I don't see how the latter would actually make sense, as it's a foodborne toxin that comes from bad fish, but it IS a thing that really exists...

posted by Guest on September 25th, 2018, 10:44 am

Lovrina Should Pray

Darkrai is going to get into trouble, according to the last page. Would Mewtwo and N even try to stop Darkrai? Karma is coming for Lovrina.

posted by SmartTurtle04 on September 25th, 2018, 11:00 am


I TOLD YOU ALL! She IS a Sociopath, Of course she could be a psychopath because I think a psychopath can't tell the difference between right or wrong and a sociopath can. I however do not know which definition fits her better can someone please clarify because at this point that girl is not right in the head and to do this the sort of thing shows just how bad she really is. REALLY! HOW IS SHE RELATED TO JEN?

posted by MercenaryX on September 25th, 2018, 12:11 pm


Congratulations, Lovrina! You've taken an ancient, powerful being and rendered it into a perpetually self-maintaining biological weapon! Great Success!

Oh, and there's just that one little hitch about it knowing what you've done to it and being in the same room as you, but I'm sure that'll work out just dandy. After all, it's not as if you've been artificially stripping away its inhibitions towards violence, right?

posted by spudwalt (Guest) on September 25th, 2018, 1:32 pm


The best part about this karma is that Lovrina is a GHOST type now...also look at the typeings of everyone in the room

posted by edgeblade on September 25th, 2018, 2:50 pm


@Guest: “sombratoxin” seems to be a thing that only exists in the world of Victory Fire. “Sombra” means “shadow” in Spanish, so “sombratoxin” - “shadow toxin” - would be some substance that causes a Pokémon to become Shadow’d.

posted by zyfaran (Guest) on September 25th, 2018, 3:36 pm


“Ptff it wasn’t TORTURE”
“It was torture”
Well this is going to end well

posted by Shadow_Strikr on September 25th, 2018, 4:57 pm

Lovrina is a Psychopath

@MercenaryX, Given the evidence that:

1) Has not shown to have a conscience. (This is self-evident, need I explain more?)

2) Was probably born this way. (Given that Jen is her polar opposite, she must have had a good upbringing.)

3) Lovrina can hold down a job. (She had a long carer as a Cipher admin, until was shut down, and she got a new job.)

4) Lovrina could not form a bond to save her life. (Victini most likely has Stockholm syndrom. Misdreavus is a different matter entirely.)

5) Could charm her way out of anything. (Mewtwo should not count, her expression shows that this is likely the first time this has ever happened.)

Conclusion: These are all signs of Psychopathy. (Bottom Line, Lovrina has Antisocial personality disorder.)

posted by SmartTurtle04 on September 25th, 2018, 5:15 pm


Dakrai with the type advantage too. But honestly I can see him fighting her and going into hyper mode and Jen having to stop him, thus making lovrina see her sister.

posted by ForeseerGengar (Guest) on September 25th, 2018, 5:26 pm


Darkrai used KILL LOVERINA!
It's super effective!
I totally see that happening!

posted by Flamaria on September 25th, 2018, 7:04 pm


c'mon Darkrai!
(or whatever a Gourgeist has inside their... y'know... skull(?))

posted by darth deebious the wise on September 25th, 2018, 7:05 pm


My respond as well, "Oh Krap"... well, guess that got backfired.

posted by MidnightUser on September 25th, 2018, 10:51 pm


Congrats Lovrina, you used your first teenage stereotype phrase of the whole comic. Oh and you're gonna die now

posted by Wolfier (Guest) on September 26th, 2018, 12:21 am


Nah, Lovrina is not insane. She's just extremely immoral and spiteful towards others. It may be hard to accept, but in a way, there isn't much separating her from the way Mewtwo used to be in the past. While his motivation was to destroy all weaker lifeforms, along with anyone who threatened him or wished to enslave him, she retaliates and thwarts anyone that tries to get between her and...whatever it is she's attempting to do. She didn't become this way for no reason, something caused her to become uncaring for those around her. From the way she is, I don't really see it as her being a sociopath. She's just a very damaged toxic person who doesn't see the value of living things, and whose only talent is that she is very intelligent. She still expressed fear, since when Darkrai woke her up from her nightmare, she thought she was about to die.

Mewtwo created clones of other pokemon and attempted to cause mass genocide on both humans and pokemon, she performed experiments on innocent pokemon and tried to make them mindless killing machines for the people she worked for. Mewtwo - The used and abused attacks the user and the abusers. Lovrina - Heartlessness caused by a heartless world where everyone and everything seems to either ignore or hate you.

Makes me wonder what would happen if either Alakazam or Mewtwo were to forcibly invade her mind using their Psychic abilities in order to view her memories. I wonder what they would find there...

I want to believe her motivations are due to some form of vengeance against the world (Victini did mention that she knew about Lovrina's inability to care, what if her motivation was to prevent that from happening, which would then undo the shadowfication performed on both her and Darkrai. Thus, rewriting both the past and the present to create a different future where Lovrina didn't turn out the way she did, and Darkrai never became the villain in PMD T/D/Sky.), but I could be wrong as well. This comic somehow has a running theme of redemption. First it was Gengar, then it Mewtwo, Wes, N, Darkrai. They have all been guilty of something in the past (Even if for some of them it wasn't their fault, they were still the ones that caused it to happen), and now it's Lovrina and possibly Victini's turn...well, if she's still alive that is. And if anyone IS ACTUALLY insane, then it would technically be both Darkrai and Victini as of now.

But then again, as people often say, there is a fine line between genius and insanity. And the difference between the two is tricky to comprehend for almost anyone.

posted by Guest on September 26th, 2018, 1:08 am


Darkrai: b***h, no.

posted by Weter 23 on September 26th, 2018, 2:24 pm


some people are saying that she is damaged and that she didn't "just become like that for no reason"

but some people are just born like that

i know a couple people who were

posted by dead water (Guest) on September 26th, 2018, 10:58 pm


Now that I think about it, based on what I played in XD I don't think that toxin can truly do any harm as long as someone is there to remind him every once in a while.
That is unless you're saying that Darkrai accumulates it at a faster rate the closer they are to being purified.

Also how does she know it's even working properly, I'm doubtful she tried to purify darkrai while she was breaking him into tiny little pieces.

posted by Wolfier (Guest) on September 26th, 2018, 11:17 pm


Nah Lovrina is definitely insane.

posted by IcyLucario on September 27th, 2018, 2:46 am

hes about to whip some body ass

posted by SentryBeat on September 27th, 2018, 10:59 am

  Oh God

It’s a weapon to surpass Metal Gear...

posted by Phil Swift (Guest) on September 27th, 2018, 2:34 pm



Maybe, but you could say the same thing about Elon Musk, or Albert Einstein, or any unethical scientist from the past. Obsessed with their vision or research, to the detriment of almost everything else. Like I said, I could be wrong. Its just that Mewtwo used to be just as cruel as she is now. Also, insanity isn't something that can be cured, its with you for the rest of your life. Medicine can't permanently fix that, and neither can therapy.

So if she's insane, then potentially, so is Mewtwo.

posted by Guest on September 27th, 2018, 2:37 pm


Not at all.
Intelligence does not equal insanity. That's ridiculous and shouldn't need to be clarified.

Lovrina is very smart. She's also seriously unhinged. These are two different things.

..And she's certainly both.

By definition, mewtwo was in a state of mind that blurred his perception and behavior- It was his intelligence and wisdom that changed him. At the time, calling him insane or unhinged would be true.

But it would not be now.

Lovrina, certainly not right in the head.

posted by IcyLucario on September 27th, 2018, 4:21 pm



Unhinged, how can you be so sure? We don't know that yet.

Also, I didn't ever say intelligence equates to insanity, only that to the average person, it might sometimes appear that way.

Anyways, this is starting to feel a bit too much like a debate, so I'll just leave it at that.

posted by Guest on September 27th, 2018, 4:37 pm


Get her, Darkrai!

posted by Lightseed on September 27th, 2018, 11:42 pm

Darkrai Does Something Bad

@Guest, Lovrina is a morally corrupt person. The important thing, is that Lovrina gets to see her actions take full effect. She may or may not be insane, but karma is coming for her. We shall see what Darkrai does in about half an hour. (Please don't compare Mewtwo to Lovrina. It is not a fair comparison.)

posted by SmartTurtle04 on September 28th, 2018, 1:34 am


Idk, i kinda agree with them though. I don't like Lovrina, but there is no way her actions are worse than Mewtwo's. I mean, Hitler himself is responsible for killing millions of people without lifting a finger since he had soldiers carry out his dirty work, and EVEN HE wasn't technically insane. Were the soldiers that followed his orders also insane as well?

Just saw new chapter. THAT WAS A SICK ASS BURN LMAO XD!

posted by kuoli (Guest) on September 28th, 2018, 2:47 am


Ahh shit

posted by Cj dizzle on April 29th, 2019, 8:03 am