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June 7th, 2016, 2:07 am




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Chances are some heroes came to the rescue...
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Nah, I'm still betting for Mewtwo heroic sacrifice instead. He had to go down since he's too OP otherwise.

posted by Guest on June 7th, 2016, 2:15 am



  Game Over

Yeah...unless somebody else jumps in they don't stand a chance in hell lol. Totally hoping Mew shows up out of nowhere.

posted by Guest on June 7th, 2016, 2:35 am



 

Man, all I had to see was the name of the comic and I knew Victini was coming after them, seriously steamed.

I'm rootin' for Gengar and Darkrai to come out of nowhere and save the day. Somehow. Or else that bracelet will suddenly trigger.

Aw, Mewtwo looks so tired in that third panel there. :(

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So...

WHY DOES EVERYTHING HAVE TO END ON A CLIFFHANGER?! This is just as bad as Order of the Stick! Oh well. At least I know when you're going to update.

posted by ReaderWriterNerd&Geek (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 2:37 am



 

I don't know about anyone else, but I'm kinda opening that Hoopa is going to pop out of nowhere.

posted by Thelinkmaster001 (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 3:05 am



 

Oh I'm sorry, normally I don't snap like that. I just that I'm a little ABSOLUTELY LIVID!.

posted by AuraFlash (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 4:20 am





 

Darkrai, now would be a GREAT time for you to decide that you feel like some payback.

Otherwise, RIP in piece Jen and Co.

posted by Malc Modnar on June 7th, 2016, 4:31 am



 

Cue bracelet

posted by Tallen (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 5:12 am





 

ReaderWriterNerd&Geek - I wrote up a little thing about VF writing structure - sulfurbunny.deviantart.com/journal/Victory-Fire-and-the-Three-Act-Structure-484866393 if you're curious. The pages are generally designed to end on a cliffhanger, or "hook", as part of their story structure.

EDIT: SmackJeeves really does NOT want me to be able to put a clickable link to the journal. Sorry, you'll have to copy/paste the URL.

posted by sulfurbunny on June 7th, 2016, 5:54 am





 

Like any good drug dealer, Sulfur makes sure you always stay hooked.

posted by Malc Modnar on June 7th, 2016, 6:25 am





 

Victini's face in panel 5: WHAT ARE YEH DOIN' IN MY SWAMP

posted by Starlyte on June 7th, 2016, 6:29 am





 

just about every comment of mine has been meme-y garbage and i am ashamed

posted by Starlyte on June 7th, 2016, 6:30 am





 

@Malc Modnar yeah Darkrai + gengar need to come out and kick ass or Mewtwo's bracelet needs to kick it into high gear or we're all SCREWED
also ur drug dealer comment is A+ 10/10 my dude

posted by Starlyte on June 7th, 2016, 6:35 am





 

Victini, you forgot the "Smash the cinder's cinders into cinders" part.

posted by WiispNightmare on June 7th, 2016, 6:53 am



 

Would be good time for a big darn heroes moment about now...

Also I can't help but to think Jen and everyone else won't truly be safe until Cipher is dealt with which makes me wonder what N is up to.

posted by Aline1 on June 7th, 2016, 9:28 am





 

Victini smash.

posted by MatrixMercenary on June 7th, 2016, 9:44 am





 

Help us Darkrai, your our only hope.

posted by PJSam on June 7th, 2016, 9:55 am



 

@sulfurbunny: Ahhh, I got it now. :) It's cool that you have it all worked out; I'm much more random with my stories. If anybody ever asks me why I ended on a cliffhanger, it'll just be *blink blink* "Because it seemed like it should end there." LOL Now I have something to consider, however: the tripartite structure. (And I know a new word, so, that's cool! Wait, that is a word, right?)

I don't know if your question at the end still stands or whether you've *been* posting more writey stuff, but I enjoyed that and would like to see more, if you haven't.

My main complaint is that the pages are so short, so I wait four days and then it's over in six panels, but I know how hard it is to draw, so really, I've got to credit you with taking on this massive project at all. You're awesome.

@Malc Modnar: Yes, she (she and she? They?) do. Does. Whatever. :P

P.S. Er, Victini...I'm not sure you want to hear this just now, but, ah...you can't really smash cinders. I just thought I'd notify you. Yeah.

posted by ReaderWriterNerd&Geek (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 10:39 am





 

That seems a liiiiittle excessive there, Victini.

posted by Nashew on June 7th, 2016, 4:27 pm



 

Pannel six they're all like dear in the headlights, just stare at the legendary shadow pokemon trying to kill you. Don't run or scatter or anything.

posted by 42Meep (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 5:29 pm



 

Man, if I had a poke for every time I've ran outta Orans right before/during a boss battle...

posted by Fireflux on June 7th, 2016, 9:19 pm



  WELL

There fucked they had a good run what a shame

posted by Mystic Fire (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 9:22 pm



 

It looks like this is about to be Victini's *Puts On Shades* FINAL SMASH!

Yeeeeeeeeaaaaaaahhhh!

posted by Guest on June 7th, 2016, 9:51 pm



 

Victini, you're supposed to put the cinders in a box, the put that box into another box, mail the cinders to yourself THEN smash it with a mallet. What are you doing you silly thing?

posted by Mippers (Guest) on June 7th, 2016, 10:06 pm





 

Gangar, anytime now would be great!

posted by MercenaryX on June 8th, 2016, 10:38 am



 

@Mippers (Guest): Aw, man, I was gonna make that exact joke! XD

posted by ReaderWriterNerd&Geek (Guest) on June 8th, 2016, 6:32 pm